Question

寒假將至，同學們就自己寒假生活的安排進行了交流。請你用英語向大家介紹一下班上的同學及你自己的假期計劃。文章開頭已給出。

要求：1、語句通順，意思連貫，表達準確，詞數為60-80個單詞；

2、文中不要提及真實的校名或學生 姓名；

3、用上方框里面的提示和短語，內容也可適當發揮。

Winter vacation is coming. We have different plans for it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Answer 1

Winter vacation is coming. We have different plans for it. We discussed about our plans with one another. Now, allow me to tell you something about our plans. Some of the classmates are going to take a trip to Xi’an, they want to relax themselves during the trip. Some students are hard-working, they are going to study at home and read a lot of books to increase their knowledge. They are going to prepare for their future study. Some students want to keep fit ,so they are going to take part in more exercise， like going skating with friends，they also want to go to the movies for fun。Some other students want to learn something important，for example，they want to learn to make fruit salad，they want to take piano lessons，too。I also made my plan,I am going to visit my uncle and aunt, I haven't seen them for a long time. And I also want to study English well in the coming year, so I am going to read more English books and read English aloud every morning during the winter vacation, I want to be a famous English teacher in the future ，so I must prepare for it. I believe that my dream will come true in the future.

【解析】

試題分析：本題要求學生用英語向大家介紹一下班上的同學及你自己的假期計劃。文章開頭已給出。在寫作時要注意以下幾個方面：1、語句通順，意思連貫，表達準確，詞數為60-80個單詞；2、文中不要提及真實的校名或學生 姓名；3、用上方框里面的提示和短語，內容也可適當發揮。題目中給出的詞匯非常具體詳細，動筆前要根據這些內容組織語言，列出簡單提綱。確定句子的時態。關鍵單詞等問題。注意不要遺漏要點。寫作中要注意語意通順，符合邏輯關系。上下文之間可以適當使用連詞。

【亮點說明】這篇文章使用了通俗的語言表達了題目要求的各個要點。條理清晰明了。在學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理.。

考點：話題作文。