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書面表達(dá)(共20分)

上周，你班以“告別陋習(xí)，走向文明”為主題進(jìn)行了一次班會(huì)活動(dòng)。通過活動(dòng)，同學(xué)們收獲很大，尤其是李華同學(xué)進(jìn)步最快。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容以“Li Hua’s Changes”寫一篇關(guān)于李華!的短文；倡導(dǎo)大家都向李華同學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)。

要求：  1．語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)法正確，字?jǐn)?shù)80詞左右。

2．文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校名

過去表現(xiàn)	現(xiàn)在表現(xiàn)
經(jīng)常上學(xué)遲到	準(zhǔn)時(shí)到校
亂扔垃圾	幫助清潔校園
經(jīng)常玩電腦游戲	積極參加學(xué)校的各種活動(dòng)
經(jīng)常不完成作業(yè)	上課認(rèn)真，作業(yè)認(rèn)真
不愛和同學(xué)說話	與別人相處融洽

 

Li Hua’s Changes

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Answer 1

【答案】

Li Hua makes the greatest progress during this activity. He used to be late, but now he is on time. He used to drop litter anywhere, but now he helps to clean up the school. At present, Li Hua joins the school all kinds of activities and listen to the teacher carefully in class. Of course, he also do well in his homework. However, he used to play computer games and didn’t finish his homework. He used to be quiet and didn’t like to talk with others. But now he gets on well with others.

Li Hua’s changes make us impress. Everyone should learn from him and put heart into everything he does.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。以表格的形式給出了作文的主要內(nèi)容，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容確定主要句子的時(shí)態(tài)，及句式等重要內(nèi)容。由于材料涉及過去和現(xiàn)在的內(nèi)容，故注意過去時(shí)態(tài)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)的應(yīng)用。

考點(diǎn)：本題考查學(xué)生語(yǔ)言組織和表達(dá)能力

點(diǎn)評(píng):該題型主要考查學(xué)生的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力，在寫作中根據(jù)所給提示和語(yǔ)言信息，不遺漏要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。做到表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫