Question

第四部分：書(shū)面表達(dá)(共兩節(jié)，35分)第一節(jié)情景作文

 假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高二(1)班的學(xué)生李華，利用上周末的時(shí)間幫助祖父母安排了去北戴河的旅行。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，敘述你從準(zhǔn)備到送行的全過(guò)程。

    注意：1．周記的開(kāi)頭已為你寫好。

2．詞數(shù)不少于60。

Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe.__________________________________

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Answer 1

One possible version：

Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe.。on Saturday morning ，together with my grandparents ，I searched the Internet for the train schedule ，the weather in Beidaihe，and some hotel information 。in the afternoon，I went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there was a long queue 。after dinner ，I packed into the suitcase the things my grandparents need ，such as clothes ，glasses ，an umbrella ，and a map。The next morning ，I went to the station to see them off 。waving goodbye to them on the platform ，I felt happy for them and wished them a safe journey。

解析:

【思路點(diǎn)撥】試題為應(yīng)用文中的看圖寫作，要求寫一篇周記，試題只給出四幅圖片，并未給出所有的具體寫作細(xì)節(jié)，為半開(kāi)放性寫作。寫好此文，需注意三點(diǎn)：一是寫周記格式要準(zhǔn)確；二是要詳略得當(dāng)，要根據(jù)圖片所給的內(nèi)容去寫，切忌長(zhǎng)篇大論，更切忌不著邊際與圖片無(wú)關(guān)的內(nèi)容；三是要適當(dāng)?shù)卦黾蛹?xì)節(jié)，恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂眠B接過(guò)渡詞，以使行文連貫。

【范文點(diǎn)評(píng)】文章要點(diǎn)齊全，寫作層次清楚，以時(shí)間順序展開(kāi)全文，能緊扣圖片要點(diǎn)，上下文連貫。在表達(dá)句式上，注意了句式結(jié)構(gòu)的多變，以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，適當(dāng)?shù)氖褂昧瞬⒘芯洌��?jiǎn)單通俗易懂。注重了連接過(guò)渡詞及固定短語(yǔ)的的使用，如although, together with, manage to do等,簡(jiǎn)單中不乏顯示出較強(qiáng)的基本功和語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。