Task-based Writing―Argumentation
閱讀下面短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
The generation gap between students and their teachers is becoming more significant with only 3. 3 per cent out of a survey group of 1 000 students from 30 key middle schools in the city saying they would be willing to tell their teachers of their inner thoughts.
In today’s educational environment teachers are considered to be the authority figure for learning instead of also becoming a good friend in the lives of students.
As only students with good marks in exams are considered the “apples in the eyes” of the teachers, most students think their teachers to be partial(偏心).
“I feel sad to hear such remarks” said Yu Yi a well-known special-class teacher.
She recalled that in the past teachers and students would play basketball together or comment on novels while sitting on the grass during a break. But today study and good marks are the only topics of conversation between students and teachers.
“Schools are not only the place where knowledge is imparted (傳授) but also where students are taught how to be an upright(正直的) person” Yu said. “The success of a person is not merely determined by intelligence but also by emotional state.”
Yang Xiong，director of the Juvenile ['dʒu:vinail] Research Institute（青少年研究所）， said the educational system which focuses on examinations should be held to be substantially [səb'stænʃ(ə)li]（實質上）responsible. (216 words)
[寫作內容]
1. 以約30個詞概括學生不愿告訴老師內心想法的原因；
2. 然后以約120個詞就“現代師生關系”這個主題發表你的看法，并包括如下要點：
(1)你是否愿意告訴老師你內心的想法？為什么？
(2)你希望你與你的老師之間的關系是怎樣的？如何才能建立這種關系？
[寫作要求]
(1)可以使用實例或其它論述方法支持你的論點，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
(2)標題自定；
(3)文中不能出現考生真實姓名和學校名稱
[評分標準]
概括準確、語言規范、內容合適、篇章連貫。
Title: _______________________________________________________
Para.1 Summary ( 30 words or so) _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（5分）Para.2 Write one transitional sentence. ( Are you willing to share your inner thoughts with your teachers ? Why? )
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para.3 What relationship is between teachers and you? How to build this kind of relationship?
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Para.4 Sum up. (20 words or so) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Possible version: ( 177 words)
Love and Concern Make Ideal Relationship
According to the passage we can know students are becoming unwilling to confess（坦白） to their teachers because they are not equal in position and teachers lay too much emphasis on the academic performances of the students.（ 36 words）
As far as I’m concerned, I am willing to share my inner thoughts with my teachers. For one thing, they show love and concern for their students and are good listeners. For another, I always find it easy to seek support and advice from them, from which I benefit and learn a lot. （53 words）
In this case, an ideal relationship between teachers and students is very important. In my opinion, this relationship should be one filled with love, care and understanding, in which teachers and students show respect for each other and exchange ideas freely. To build a relationship of this kind, teachers should become friends of students while students ought to place more trust in their teachers and give voice to their feelings frankly.
（71 words）
To sum up, only in this way can we enjoy a harmonious relationship between teachers and students. （17 words）
2009年高考英語備考要訣及最新熱點作文預測
1、工夫和功夫
現在高考特別強調以能力立意命題，注意對學生理論聯系實際和創新意識的考查。由此，同學們的功夫要想達到高考所需要的高度，單純地靠拼時間、搞題海、死記硬背等做法已不適應新的考試要求。所以，同學們不能只以學了多長時間為目的，而是要看有多少是有效時間，更要看是否在能力上有所提高。
當然，功夫是要有工夫做保障的，所以，要想學習好，就不能偷懶，就要多學多練。而且，要學得聰明，要反思自己的學習，要問一問自己學得是否有長進？對自己的弱科弱項是否有主動補習的計劃？是否充分利用了學習資源等等。
2、做題和寫題
同學們每天都忙于做題，但往往只重數量卻忽視了質量，只關注會做不會做、結果對不對，卻忽視了其他更加重要的，比如書寫、思路的總結。
書寫規范也是思維能力和邏輯推理能力的體現，對提高理性解題能力非常有幫助。由于同學們使用的教輔資料預留書寫空間太少，要盡量主動選擇一些題目規規矩矩書寫解答過程。建議每科自備一個“好題本”，將經典題目及其解答過程規范書寫下來，并經常翻看此本，定會受益匪淺。
平時還要多看一些有詳盡解答過程的例題。先獨立念題、審題、分析，找出解題路徑，然后和答案對照。對一些典型例題不能只滿足于看明白，要獨立默寫出解答過程，這樣既可以培養書寫能力又可培養對題目背景深刻理解的能力，還是檢驗是否真會的有效措施。
3、聽明白和想明白
許多同學常苦惱于課上聽老師講得很明白，可一到自己做題怎么就不會了呢？事實上，聽得明白是你在老師一步一步的引領下明白的，這并不是你自己真實能力的體現，更不代表你已經具備了解決這些問題的能力。因此，要想提高分析問題解決問題的能力，就必須在“聽明白”的基礎上進一步去“想明白”。“聽明白”只能說你被別人說服了，而“想明白”是自己說服自己，是真正弄明白，想明白更是對基礎知識和基本技能進行加工、濃縮、提煉、升華，形成綜合能力的關鍵。所以，課上要積極思考，課下要及時再想一想。
熱點1: 劉翔退賽
在2008年北京奧運會上,中國著名運動員劉翔因腿傷退出比賽,引起人們的廣泛爭議,下面是騰訊網站的一項調查：運動員受傷后,應該堅持還是應該退出?
選項名稱
投票數
百分比
趨勢
應該退出,健康比金錢重要
222292
34.77%
上升
運動場就是戰場,劉翔應該堅持
123752
19.36%
上升
請你結合上表,寫一篇英語短文,談談自己的看法.
In the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games Chinese athlete Liu Xiang dropped
out of the race due to his foot injury, which led to a heated discussion among
people across the country.
According to a survey conducted by Tencent
Website, about 34% of the people think an athlete should quit the race when
injured since health is much more important than a gold medal; While nearly 20%
of the netizens believe that an injured athlete
should hold on to the end instead of giving up halfway. They regard the sport
field as a battlefield in which every athlete should fight for the honor of his
or her country in spite of any difficulty.
In my opinion, it’s a right choice for Liu Xiang to choose to quit
the race. For one thing, nothing is more important than health and sports
doesn’t mean sacrificing one’s health for a gold medal; for another, after Liu
Xiang recovers fully, he still has many chances to realize his dream.
熱點2:北京奧運
經過運動員們16天的激烈拼搏,第29 屆奧運會于2008年8月24日在北京落下帷幕.中國運動員發揮出色,獲得了51枚金牌,為中國贏得了巨大的榮譽.奧運會期間,有很多值得我們回味的地方.你作為一名中學生―李華,圍繞奧運會對人類的影響,談一下自己的看法,題目自擬.
注意:詞數120左右.
What a
Great Olympic Games!
The 29th Olympic Games has been over in
It is our athletes’ intelligence and other qualities that have won
the great honor for us Chinese all! Days when we were looked down upon have
gone forever! From the very Games, we have proved that our government has the
ability to hold the Olympic Games successfully! Not only can we hold the
Olympic Games well, but also we can perform well. The fact has showed
everything to the world! It is the successful 29th Olympic Games that destroys
the saying of those who doubted about it days ago! What a great, successful and
impressive Olympic Games!
熱點3: 翟志剛首次太空行走
2008年9月25日,中國成功地將三人小組送入太空,其中航天員翟志剛在太空首次行走,這是我國自2003年以來最具有挑戰性的太空任務.請簡單介紹此次 “神舟七號”的有關情況.內容包括:
1.這是一次具有歷史使命的飛行,而且技術上的成果基本都是我國自主研發的.
2.這次的任務主要是太空行走,它將有助于中國在未來幾年內建立中國的第一個空間站.
注意:載人飛船manned spaceship/spacecraft; 出艙活動an extra-vehicular activity;空間站space station
Shenzhou-Ⅶ, which
was shot up into space on September 25,returned to Earth three days later,
having completed its historic mission.
It is the country’s most challenging space mission since 2003.The
main mission is to carry out the space walk, known as an extra-vehicular
activity, or EVA, which is expected to help China master the technology to
create it’s first space station in the next few years. During the traveling, Zhai Zhigang, one of the three
astronauts on board Shenzhou-Ⅶ,stepped out of the
capsule and conducted the historic space walk. Most importantly, all along
熱點4：高三備考復習效率
在緊張的高三備考階段，英語老師為了提高復習效率，廣泛征求學生意見。假如你叫張華，請根據以下提示，給英語老師寫封信，表達你們的需求和建議。
●適當放慢進度，留出思考時間
●反復訓練重要、易錯知識點
●指導方法
●減少作業量以保證質量
●給予更多鼓勵
注意：1.根據以上內容寫一篇短文，不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節以使行文連貫。
2.要準確使用語法和詞匯；使用一定的句型、詞匯，清楚、連貫地表達自己的意思；
3. 詞數：100個左右。開頭已給出，不計詞數。
Dear Mr. Wang,
We’re so pleased that you are willing to share our views.
In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid
foundation. As you know, we didn’t learn well enough in the first two years, so
please slow down and make sure we have really mastered something. Besides, we
need a little more time to think for ourselves. As for those important points
which also make us confused, would you please give us more practice in case we
forget? Meanwhile, we need your instruction, for example, in how to write in
natural English. I still have another request: assign us less homework in order
that we can do it more efficiently.
By the way, we often feel frustrated, which has a very bad effect on
our study. We would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from
time to time.
熱點5：奧運會獲獎運動員的高薪問題
近幾年，奧運會獲獎運動員的高薪問題引起了廣泛的社會關注。有些人支持這種做法，認為運動員們付出了很多努力，應該得到回報；有些人則持反對意見。請你就此寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文并發表自己的看法。
In recent years, the topic whether it is fair for athletes to pocket
large sums of money has aroused more and more discussion.
Those who support giving sportsmen high salaries think that athletes
have won a great reputation for our country in the Olympic Games. What’s more,
athletes must undergo painstaking physical and psychological training. Besides,
they offer a lot of encouragement to young people to take part in physical
activities.
However, some people have different ideas. They consider that
athletes do little to boost the national economy directly. Thus they should not
receive so much money.
I believe that they should get high salaries, considering all the
efforts they have made.
熱點6：高考狀元與廣告
高考過后，總有一些學習用品商家千方百計在高考狀元身上下工夫，讓狀元們說是使用過他們的產品后才取得了優異成績。請你用英語寫一篇100詞左右的短文，談談自己的看法。內容應包括以下要點：
1. 簡要描述這種現象； 2. 給狀元們提一點建議。
注意：
1. 可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
2. 參考詞匯：狀元 Number One Scholar；產品 product；適合suitable
After the college entrance exams, some companies that sell learning
products are always trying to do anything they can to make full use of Number
One Scholars in order to sell their products.
In fact, it’s not easy for students to become Number One Scholars.
Most of them succeed not because of the products, but their proper way of
learning and hard work. Every student has his own way of studying, so the
Number One Scholars’ experience may not be suitable for all the students. Most
important of all, not all of these products are good enough to help us study.
I do hope that Number One Scholars can think of the poor students
instead of themselves only.
名師預測2009年高考英語寫作熱點題目
1. 書面表達熱點預猜（1）
假設你是李紅，你的一位美國筆友Robert寫E-mail問及你高考后暑假的安排，請根據以下要點，寫一封100詞左右的email回復他, 可以適當增加細節。
1. 學開車 2. 參加英語培訓課程
3. 去北京看奧運會 4. 游覽北京的名勝
注意：1.根據以上內容寫一篇短文，不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節以使行文連貫。2.要準確使用語法和詞匯；使用一定的句型、詞匯，清楚、連貫地表達自己的意思；3. 詞數：100個左右。開頭已給出，不計詞數。
Dear Robert,
How time flies!
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【命題方向與寫作提示】高考英語書面表達寫作素材都是與中學生的日常生活相關的話題，會避免出現考生不熟悉的話題，也不會出現農村或城市學生不熟悉的話題，注重考查考生的語言表達能力。本篇素材考查書信體裁的作文，是應用文的寫作，話題涉及社會熱點：北京奧運會，內容與中學生的實際生活相關：高考后暑假的安排，體裁是書信體的電子郵件。寫作要點包括：1）問候；2）引入話題：高考臨近，高考后的安排；3）學開車；4）參加英語培訓課程；5）去北京看奧運會；6）游覽北京的名勝；7）結束語。
【寫作提示】書面表達一定要注意要點齊全，寫作中要注意適當增加細節以使上下文連貫，并使用一定數量的句式結構。
范文 (One possible version)
Dear Robert:
How time flies! The happy days we shared often shines in my memory.
What about you? As you know, my college entrance exam is approaching, which
also announces the end of this sort of pressing study life. However，I intend to have a meaningful summer vacation. First, I will learn
to drive to get a driving license, which is a new activity for a high school
graduate in
That is the plan for my vacation. I am looking forward to being told
about your arrangements of vacation. Give me your quick reply soon, OK?
Best wishes!
2. 書面表達熱點預猜（2）
如今世界糧食短缺，價格飛漲，給部分地區造成社會動蕩。假設在你校開展的研究性學習中，你們小組以“World Food Crisis”為題進行研究，現在請你代表你們小組向全體同學簡要介紹你們的研究成果。主要內容如下：
造成的原因 1. 氣候變化，造成糧食減產
2. 工業發展，城市化加速，耕地減少
3. 世界能源價格上漲，使用糧食生產生物燃料
應對的措施 1. 注重環保，改善生態
2. 嚴格保護耕地
3. 富國支持窮國，促進世界和諧
你如何做出
自己的貢獻 1．……
2．……
注意：1. 內容包括以上要點，但不要逐句翻譯
2. 字數150左右，文章開頭已提供，不計入總詞數
3. 參考詞匯：城市化 urbanization 生物燃料 biofuels
Hello, everyone,
Now I’ll tell you something about our research project The World
Food Crisis on behalf of our group. As you know, food shortages have hit many
countries in the world and even caused social unrest in some areas.
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【命題方向與寫作提示】這是一篇提綱式的議論文寫作素材，探討國計民生的社會熱點話題：糧食價格上漲。寫作時要注意避免逐句翻譯，并適當增加細節以使行文連貫。
范文 (One possible version)
Hello, everyone,
Now I’ll tell you something about our research project The World Food Crisis on behalf of our group. As you know, food shortages have hit many countries in the world and even caused social unrest in some areas. But who is responsible for the current world food crisis? First, annual world grains output has declined because of climate change. Then lots of farmland has been lost due to the rapid development of industry and urbanization. Besides, faced with the rising energy prices, people have turned to the production of biofuels, which has worsened the severe situation.
Then what should we do to deal with the problem? On one hand, we should focus on the environmental protection and improve the ecology. On the other hand, strict measures should be taken to protect farmland. Of course, to build a harmonious world the developed countries should take their responsibilities to help the poor ones experiencing food shortage.
As for me, I will call on the people around me to live thriftily. And for the moment, I think, we should study hard to develop science and help solve the food shortage in the future.
3. 書面表達熱點預猜（3）
下表是某校關于中學生雙休日活動現狀的一份調查，請結合表格內容，用英語寫一篇120―150單詞的短文，就中學生應如何過雙休日發表你的看法。
學習情況 幾乎都在學習 半天學習半天活動 幾乎都在做其他事情
16% 24% 60%
娛樂休閑 體育活動 游玩和購物 上網看電視
20% 40% 40%
去圖書館 經常 偶爾 幾乎沒有
5% 23% 72%
課外興趣小組 經常 偶爾 不參加
10% 20% 70%
范文 (One possible version)
This form displays the result of a survey on how to spend students’ weekend. It says that few students are glued to their schoolwork any more. Instead, they prefer to surf on the internet, watch TV, go shopping rather than involve in sports games. Library and interest groups are available but not favourable.
Personally I think, students are now freed from heavy burden but their spare time is not well arranged. They are expected to spend some time on what they learn instead of hanging out. More time should be spent not only on green field but also in the libraries to build up themselves physically and mentally. Besides, more interest groups should be established for students to widen their horizon and sharpen their brains so that they can become more creative eventually. All these will contributes a lot to a well-informed and highly qualified teenager.
In conclusion, students should be more scheduled with colorful and fruitful activities.
4. 書面表達熱點預猜（說明文）
假如你是李明，你發現部分同學每次遇到重要考試，都會出現一些焦慮癥狀。請你用英語寫一封信，向某學生英文報編輯反映該問題。信的內容應包括下列要點：
焦慮癥狀 建 議
頭暈、乏力、睡眠不好、食欲不振等 1．考前制定好合適的復習計劃
2．考試期間正常作息
3．睡前洗熱水澡、喝熱牛奶等有助于睡眠
其他建議(內容由考生自己擬定)
注意：1.根據以上內容寫一篇短文，不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節以使行文連貫。
2.要準確使用語法和詞匯；使用一定的句型、詞匯，清楚、連貫地表達自己的意思；
3. 詞數：100個左右。開頭已給出，不計詞數。
參考詞匯：頭暈―dizzy(adj.)
Dear editor,
I’m Li Ming of Senior Three,
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Li Ming
范文 (One possible version)
I am Li Ming of Senior Three,
Most of us feel nervous whenever we’re taking an important exam. Some will feel dizzy or tired, some will suffer from lack of sleep, and some will lose their appetite. In fact, all these symptoms have terrible effects on our exams and we are all eager to get rid of them.
First of all, in my opinion, it’s important for us to have a fight attitude towards exams. They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results. Study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam. In this way we can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams.
Besides, enough sleep can make us energetic and enable us to perform well in an exam. Therefore, during the period of exams, we should not stay up too late. We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed. They might help us to have a sound sleep.
(We’d better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercises before and during an exam so that we can keep ourselves relaxed and then concentrate ourselves on exams.)
5. 書面表達熱點預猜（5）
在緊張的高三備考階段，英語老師為了提高復習效率，廣泛征求學生意見。假如你叫張華，請根據以下提示，給英語老師寫封信，表達你們的需求和建議。
●適當放慢進度，留出思考時間
●反復訓練重要、易錯知識點
●指導方法
●減少作業量以保證質量
●給予更多鼓勵
注意：1.根據以上內容寫一篇短文，不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節以使行文連貫。
2.要準確使用語法和詞匯；使用一定的句型、詞匯，清楚、連貫地表達自己的意思；
3. 詞數：100個左右。開頭已給出，不計詞數。
Dear Mr. Wang,
We’re so pleased that you are willing to share our views.
In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation.________________
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范文 (One possible version)
Dear Mr. Wang,
We’re so pleased that you are willing to share our views.
In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation. As you know, we didn’t learn well enough in the first two years, so please slow down and make sure we have really mastered something. Besides, we need a little more time to think for ourselves. As for those important points which also make us confused, would you please give us more practice in case we forget? Meanwhile, we need your instruction, for example, in how to write in natural English. I still have another request: assign us less homework in order that we can do it more efficiently.
By the way, we often feel frustrated, which has a very bad effect on our study. We would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time.
6. 書面表達熱點預猜（記敘文，圖表作文）
假如你是中學生李華，你校同學上周末剛舉行了一次英語演講比賽，請根據下表內容，用英語寫一封信給遠在美國的筆友John，介紹這次活動的情況。
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