（2）
Recently I’ve conducted a survey on if girls should 66．
lose weight among my classmates．Most of the students held the 67.
opinion girls should lose weight．In their opinion，girls who are slim 68．
are more beautiful and attractively，and they are more confident in 69．
their study and work than those who are fat．However，a few of the 70．
students have a different opinion．We think it's a waste of time 71 .
and money．In addition，lose weight may be harmful to their 72．
body and mind；After all，anything is more important than 73．
some day，they will become fatter．So it is no need for young girls 75．
to lose weight as long as they are healthy．
【答案】 66．If改為whether 67．held改為hold 68．第一個girls前加that 69．attractively改為attractive
70．正確
（3）
Dogs are one kind of the pet animals，most of them are liked 76．
by people．They are very useful．When you are in troubles， 77
it can help you．For example，in the North Pole，when you 78
want to go out to do something，you must take a sledge pulling 79
by dogs．They would help you to do the things you want , 80．
I have a little dogs at home．It’s very lovely and it’s only 81
about four month I love it very much．When I get home， 82
it will sway the tail and walk up to me．When it feels hunger， 83．
it will bark loudly．Now it was very fat．I like dogs， 84．
because they are too useful and lovely． 85．
【答案】76. them改為which 77. troubles改為trouble 78. 正確 79. pulling改為pulled 80. would改為will 81. dogs改為dog 82. month改為months 83. hunger改為hungry 84.was改為is 85. too改為very
（4）
I’m a middle school student. I once had very happy 76.______
family, and now everything has changed only because 77. ______
of my father. He used to being a very good doctor and 78. ______
was often praised for
his patients. He did housework 79. ______
almost every day and took good care of the family. 80. ______
However, he’s quite different now. He plays card all night 81. ______
and often quarreled with my mother. It seems impossible 82. ______
to have my attention fixing upon my books. I have failed 83. ______
two exams. I’m afraid it’ll destroy my family as good as 84. ______
my father himself. Could you help me and give to me some advice? 85. ______
【答案】76. very 前加a 77. and改為but 78. being改為be 79. for改為by
80. 正確 81. card改為cards 82. quarreled改為quarrels 83.fixing改為fixed 84. good改為well 85. 去掉to
2009屆考前短文改錯精選精練（2）
Nowadays, some students would not like to live in a dorm(宿舍)． 76．
Instead, they rented houses outside the school．There are 77．
advantages for all．Living in a dorm can increase friendship and 78．
cooperation among classmates，but of course it is safer．A dorm 79．
is more like a society，where enables students to learn to get along with 80．
the each other，thus preparing for the social life later．As for renting 81．
houses to live alone，it’s better for study as you can feel freely in 82．
your own room without interrupted by others．As a result，you 83．
can have more time and devote yourself to study wholeheartedly． 84．
But there may appear a few safety problem as you live outside the school． 85．
Anyhow as a student，I prefer living in a dorm．
【答案】76．正確 77.rented改為rent 78．all改為both 79. but改為and
80．where改為which 81．去掉the 82．freely改為free
83. without后加being 84．study改為studying 85.problem改為problems
（2）
I'm very glad to have received the letter you sent me two 76
weeks ago．I have been thinking about a question you asked 77
me．In my opinion，you should go back after you finish your 78
studies abroad．For one reason，that you are studying is badly 79
needed nowadays in
our country．It will be
quite easily for you 80
to find a good job．In fact，I know a few big company here in 81
our city hope to hire people like you．For another reason， 82
I think it will be
very much more convenient for you to look 83
after your parents as they are getting old．Therefore this is only 84
my point of view．It is up for you to make a right choice． 85
【答案】76．√ 77．A改為the 78．go改為come 79．That改為what 80．easily改為easy 81．company改為companies 82．city后加which／that 83．去掉very
84. Therefore改為But 85．for改為to
（3）
My parents and I went to the park last Sunday． 76．
There were lots of visitor standing in front of the ticket 77．
window．We waited a long time and buy three tickets． 78．
In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was too eager 79．
to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened 80．
my steps through the crowd．Unfortunate，I got 81．
separated from my parents．I had hard time looking 82．
for them，and I had no luck．Wandering in the park，I felt 83．
alone without any companions．Worse still，I had no money, 84．
so I had to walk to home，covering as much as 5 kilometers． 85．
【答案】
My parents and I went to the park last Sunday． 76． √
There were lots of visitor standing in front of the ticket 77． visitors
window．We waited a long time and buy three tickets． 78． bought
In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was too eager 79． so
to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened 80． Frightening
my steps through the crowd．Unfortunate，I got 81． Unfortunately
separated from my parents．I had∧ hard time looking 82． a
for them，and I had no luck．Wandering in the park，I felt 83． but
alone without any companions．Worse still，I had no money, 84． lonely
so I had to walk to
home，covering as
much as 5 kilometers．85． to
（4）
Dear Lin Tao，
I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble in deal with 76．
the new high school life．I'd like to give you any advice． 77．
Firstly，you must work hard at all lesson and try your best 78．
to get good grades．By this way，you are likely to attend an 79．
ideal university for a better future. Secondly，you need get 80．
along well with your classmates and teachers，that will 81．
help you to build good interpersonal relationships．Thirdly， 82．
you have to learn what to live on your own．The ability 83．
to survive in society is also of the great importance for us． 84．
I hope you will find these ideas usefully．All the best! 85．
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】76．deal改為dealing 77．any改為some 78．lesson改為lessons 79．By改為In 80．need后加to 81．That改為which 82．√ 83．What改為how 84．去掉the 85．usefully改為useful
2009屆考前短文改錯精選精練（1）4篇
Wise men don’t always act as wise as we think．At times 76．
they maybe done something silly：Because we always think they 77．
are well known，so the stories about their foolish acts are still 78．
widely talked throughout the world in modern times．For example， 79．
Beethoven，the great composer of Austria was said to have insisted 80．
on paying a waiter in a restaurant for a dinner he has not eaten or 81．
ever ordered；the British physicist Newton，while lives in London， 82．
cut two holes in the two doors of his flat，one big，other small， 83．
so as for his two cats to pass through them．He only thought the 84．
bigger cat could not get through the smaller holes easily． 85．
【答案】76．wise改為wisely 77．done改為do 78．去掉so
79．talked后加about 80．正確 81．has改為had 82．lived改為living
83．other前加the 84．去掉them 85．holes改為hole
（2）
Nowadays many graduate are looking forward 76. _____
to get employment in big cities, not willing to work 77. ______
in the countryside. Unfortunately, there are enough : 78.______
chances to satisfy most of the job hunters in big cities, 79. ______
while in the countryside talented people are bad needed 80. ______
but a lot of posts are waiting for you. You can put your 81. ______
abilities to good use and you will able to make greater 82. ______
contributions of building a modern countryside. 83. _____.
Therefore, I believe in you can have as bright a future 84._______
in the countryside as we will have in the cities. 85. _____
【答案】76. graduate改為 graduates 77. getting 78. are后加 not 79. 正確 80. bad改為badly 81.but改為and/so 82.will后加be 83. of改為to 84.去掉 in 85. we改為you
（3）
It is real a good chance to have all of you here 76.
We have spent several precious weekend in learning 77.
in the English Club．Because we have been members 78.
for a short period of time．We have made a great progress． 79.
That is because we are all very active and the 80.
activities are not only enjoyable and also helpful. Besides， 81.
the foreign teachers here work hard and try his best to make 82.
the activities lively and interested I am very pleased to say 83.
that all of us greatly improved our spoken English so far．I 84.
am looking forward to seeing all of them again in the near future 85.
【答案】76.real改為really 77. weekends 78. Because-Though/ Although 79. made后去掉a 80. 正確81. and改為but 82. his改為their 83. interested改為interesting 84. improved前加have 85. them改為you
（4）
第一節 短文改錯（共10小 題；每小題1分，滿分10分）
When I was young, I didn’t know what friendship. When I 76．______
stayed with my friends, a warm feeling came out of the bottom from 77．______
my heart. Now I have grown up and got many friend. And I 78 ______
have been tasted the pleasant feeling of friendship. When I am happy, 79．______
they are also happy and shared the happiness with me. When I 80．______
make progress, they will be very exciting. Instead, when 81．______
I’m in a difficult situation, they will offer help to me. So 82．______
friendship is never an one-way ticket. If we want to get it, 83．______
we must treat others well at first. We should always be ready to 84．______
help others, especially that they are in difficult situations. 85．______
【答案】76．在friendship后加was 77．from改為of 78．friend改為friends 79．刪去been 80．shared改為share 81．exciting改為excited 82．So改為But 83．an改為a 84．正確 85．that改為when
2009 屆高考英語作文優秀范文十篇
書面表達001
某對外發行的英文報紙對中國群眾體育現狀進行了調查，請根據下列圖表和所給提示，用英語寫一篇報道，以便向該報投稿。
說明：1．體質下降；
2．應充分認識體育鍛煉的重要性；
3．采取措施，提供人們鍛煉的場地和器材（facilities ）；
4．字數：120 ― 140. 報道的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。
Recently,
we have made a survey of the people on physical training. Only 35 percent of
the people surveyed have taken part in physical activities.
Over
half of the people say they haven’t got enough time to take exercises. 34.9
percent of them complain they don’t have places where they can relax themselves
and that there are not enough training facilities, while another 12.9 percent
of the people feel that they live too far away from the training centers. Some
of them even don’t know how to train.
For lack of physical training, many people are not in good health. People should realize the importance of it, and measures should be taken to provide people with training facilities.
c.o.m
書面表達002
以下是某英文報聯合你校對你市（Kangming City）1998年到2008年家庭消費變化的圖表，請據此寫一篇短文，作一文字說明。文章的開頭已經給出。詞數110左右。
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圖表1 圖表2
The
average family income in our
The biggest part of the average family expenses is housing. In 1998, the average family spent 25 percent of its income on housing. In 2880, expenses on housing rose to 42 percent. Food and drink are the second biggest part of the average family expenses. In 1998, about 18% of the average income was spent on this item. In 2008, the figure grew to 30%. As a result of such increase in the expenses on housing and food, expenses on other items have been reduced from 57% in 1998 to 28%in 2008.
Thus, a conclusion can be drawn that as income increases, people can improve their living step. But still the average family has to spend a large part of income to meet the basic needs.
書面表達003
請觀察下圖，請以“Where is my home?”為題，用英語寫一篇100詞左右的短文。內容包括：
1．簡述圖所反映的兩個環境問題；
2．簡析成因；
3．發表自己的看法。
注：文章的開頭已經給出，不計人詞數；參考詞匯：口罩mask
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Where is my home?
Some fish are forced to leave polluted water and are flying in the sky. But unfortunately, air is also so polluted that they have to wear masks. Each of them is crying, “Where is my home?” What a terrible sight!
Mankind has brought so much pollution. Waste is being poured into rivers and seas. Poisons to kill pests in farming and chemicals go into rivers and seas, too. Poisonous gasses from factories also make the air so dirty. The whole balance of nature is being destroyed as a result of our ignorance of the environmental protection.
Personally, man can not live alone on the earth. Should fish die from serious pollution, so would man! It is high time we did something to prevent such a scene from happening.
書面表達004
假如你是高三的學生，最近你就高三模擬考試該難還是該容易這個問題進行了一次調查。請結合下表內容，用英語寫一篇短文，介紹有關調查情況，并發表自己的看法。
贊成偏難，反對偏易
贊成偏易，反對偏難
1．喜歡挑戰，越難越好；
2．有助于學生了解自己的薄弱環節，
改進學習方法。
1．題目太難，學生會泄氣，會害怕今后的高考；
2．題目容易，易獲高分，有自信。
注意：1．詞數150左右，開頭已為你寫好(不計入總詞數)；
2．可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
Recently I have made an investigation on whether a model-test paper for Senior Three should be difficult or easy．Opinions are divided on this matter．
Some students think that a difficult exam is just like a challenge．The harder, the better．It can help students find out where they are weak in studies and improve their learning approaches.
Others，however，are against a difficult exam．In their opinion，if it is very difficult，they may become discouraged and feel terrible about the coming College Entrance Examination．Besides，with an easy exam，they can get high marks and gain confidence．
I prefer it to be neither too difficult nor too easy, because if it is too easy,teachers will not know how we are getting on with our studies, but if it is too difficult, we will lose heart
面表達005
從學校畢業，或上大學，或步入社會，畢業意味著前進、意味著選擇。請以Graduation and moving on為題，寫一篇100詞左右的畢業感言。
要求：1、畢業前活動：照相、留言等；
2、心情(依依不舍，又要前進)及原因等。首句已經給出，不計入總詞數。
Graduation and Moving on
Graduation is a time when we move on, from school to university, or out into the real world．
Before graduating from school, We usually have a variety of activities, like taking pictures, leaving encouraging words to one another in memory of our friendship, or giving presents to our teachers express our thanks and show respect．
However, I have mixed emotions about moving on．I want to stay and have more fun with my friends, but I will have to move on．Graduation means taking a step forward---moving onward and upward．Thus I can learn more and will be more skilled and experienced．
Graduation is coming whether we are ready or not．Let's make great efforts so that our dream will come true．
書面表達006
假定你是某英文報的小記者，最近你對大學生的就業觀點及專家對此的看法進行了采訪。請根據以下要點寫一篇題為“Different Job Outlooks”的短文，詞數100詞左右。
學生觀點：1．大部分想找一份薪金豐厚的工作；
2．部分持觀望態度，等待良機；
3．少數想自己創業。
專家觀點：不應坐等，要盡快找份工作，理由是：
1．積累經驗；
2．掙錢養活自己；
3．明年就業形勢或許更嚴峻。
Different Job Outlooks
Nowadays university graduates have different job outlooks. For most of them, to find a job with satisfactory pay is their most important wish while majority want to be self ? employed. However, a certain number of graduates are not in a hurry to hunt for jobs. They are just waiting for better chances. Toward this point of view, some experts warn that it is not wise to be just waiting. They advise that graduates should find a regular, full-time job as quickly as possible so that they can earn money to support themselves and get working experience, which will help to find a better position later. Moreover, it might be more difficult to find a satisfactory job next year.
書面表達007
不知不覺我們已進入高三年級，高考一天天逼近。為了在學習上不落后于同學，很多學生搬出學校的集體寢室，在學校附近租了房子。就這一現象請你寫一篇英語短文來發表自己的看法。內容包括：
1在校外租房子的利與弊。(至少各寫兩點)
2．你同意還是反對這種做法?并陳述你的理由。(至少寫兩點)
注意：
1．詞數為120個左右；
2．可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭語已為你寫好(不計入總宇數)。
參考詞匯：宿舍dormitory
Time seems to speed up as soon as the students step into their final and vital year．The college entrance examination is approaching day by day．Quite a few students have moved out from their dormitories to live in a rented room near the school to make every minute count．
It cannot be denied that they have their own time schedule after classes and easily concentrate on lessons alone in their small room．What’s important，with their morns taking care of them，they can spare more time for studies．However，there exist some disadvantages．For example，sometimes their minds go wandering easily without competitors round．Furthermore，a student who is left alone to study at rather an easy atmosphere tends to get distracted or even feel tired easily．
In spite of the fact that the dorm life is full of fun and friendship，noisy songs and shouts in the dorms after evening classes only quiet down long after the blackout at 10：30 p. m.，leading to a serious lack of sleep，I think．Worse still，they don’t make fullest use of time to study so，from my perspective．I prefer to live in the rented room．
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書面表達008
假設你班最近就圓明園是否重建開展了一場討論，同學們觀點有分歧，各自理由主要如下表所示，請根據表格提供的討論情況寫一篇英文報道。
贊同
反對
1．重建該園輝煌景象
1．保留原樣更為合理
2．中華文明具體體現
2．警示人們不忘過去
3．旅游新景點
3．其他建筑同樣反映中華文化（如故宮、頤和園等），重建并非必須
4．如部分恢復，可與廢墟對照，讓人們記住歷史
4．破壞該地生態環境
注意：1．詞數：150左右 2．標題、開頭已經寫好，不計入詞數。3. 要自擬結論。
參考詞匯：故宮the Palace Museum; 頤和園the Summer Palace
Should Yuanmingyuan Be Rebuilt?
Yuanmingyuan, “Garden of all gardens”, was burnt and fell into ruins in 1860． Recently my classmates had a discussion about whether it should be rebuilt or not.
Supporters of rebuilding the garden say only by doing so can we see the original sight of the garden, which reflects the Chinese civilization. And it will be another place of interest for tourists. If partly rebuilt, it will provide a comparison and help us remember the history.
Those who disagree think it more
reasonable to keep the garden like this. The ruins will remind us of the past.
We should never forget the history. Other buildings like
Personally, it is advisable to rebuild Yuanmingyuan , which will add beauty to the city . What’s more , the new scenic spot will no doubt promote the economic development of the local.
w.k.s.5.u.c.o.min
書面表達009
法國一家拍賣公司于今年2月25日在巴黎公開拍賣從中國掠奪的鼠首和兔首銅像, 此舉激起中國人民的強烈憤慨。請你根據下表提示, 用英語寫一篇短文。
文物背景
1.鼠首和兔首銅像制作于清代, 是圓明園諸多裝飾品之一；
2.1860年, 英法聯軍火燒圓明園, 搶走包括鼠首和兔首銅像等在內的大量文物。
文物事件
1.今年二月在巴黎公開拍賣；
2.中國政府堅決反對, 要求按國際法無償歸還；
3.法國公司一意孤行；
4.中國人民積極行動, 采取措施阻止拍賣。
你的感想
(請考生談談對此事的看法, 列舉兩至三條)
注意: 1.對所給要點, 逐一陳述, 可適當增加細節, 使其連貫, 不簡單翻譯。
2.詞數: 150左右。開頭已給出, 不計入總詞數。
3.參考詞匯. auction n. & vt. 拍賣relic [C] n.文物, 遺物
Last
month in
As
is known to all, the two bronze animal heads
were made during the Qing Dynasty to decorate Yuanmingyuan. In 1860, the
British and French troops broke into
The
Chinese government is strongly against this auction and has repeatedly asked
for the free return of them according to the international laws. At the same
time, the Chinese people have taken actions, too. Some people even flew to
In
my opinion, the auction should be strongly
condemned. Not only has it hurt the feelings of the Chinese people but
also it brought shame to
書面表達010
學校里一些同學互相攀比，追求時髦和高檔消費。請你根據下表中所提供的信息，寫一篇題為“My Attitude to Pursuit of Fashion in School”的英文演講稿。
現象
仿明星發型；
穿名牌衣服、名牌鞋子；
使用高檔手機；
原因
追求美；
愛面子；
感覺很酷；
你的看法
(請考生自己擬定內容，列舉兩至三點。)
Good afternoon, everyone!
The topic of my speech today is “My Attitude to Pursuit of Fashion in School”.
Now in our school there is a hot pursuit of fashion. Some students live a very expensive life. They have the same hairstyles as their favorable stars and wear top brand of clothes and shoes. Some use expensive mobile phones.
The reasons why they do so are as follows. Firstly, they hope to look smart and special. Secondly, they want to win others’ admiration and respect. In addition, it makes them feel cool .
As far as I am concerned, we students should hold the right sense of values. We should practice thrift in our daily life because it is one of our Chinese traditional virtues. What’s more , it is advisable for us to donate some pocket money to the Hope Project so that those poor children in rural areas can return to school to receive normal education. Last but not least, it is the inner beauty rather than our appearance that makes us respectable.
Thank you for listening!
平遙縣2009年4月高三高補質檢
文科綜合能力測試
本試卷分第Ⅰ卷（選擇題）和第Ⅱ卷（非選擇題）兩部分，考試分數300分，時間150分鐘。 王維彬 雷建明
命題人：陳曉華 王風麗
郭 明 孫永祥
第Ⅰ卷
注意事項：
1．答第Ⅰ卷前，考生務必將自己的姓名、準考證號、考試科目涂寫在答題卡上。
2．每小題選出答案后，用鉛筆把答題卡上對應題目的答案標號涂黑。如需改動，用橡皮擦干凈后，再選涂其他答案標號。不能答在試題卷上。
3．本卷共35小題，每小題4分，共140分。在每題給出的四個選項中，只有一項是最符合題目要求的。
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C．②③④ D．①③④
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